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I want to share an alternate universe to my little pony that I've been working on for quite a while. I'm still working on drawings for it, but I also thought maybe I should try talking to people about. Maybe it'll help to get it out there if I left something to just answer questions or just put small chunks of what's going on.

I'm sorry if I'm doing something wrong and you don't have to answer, but I thought I might try this. I've also been given a little binder with notepaper to help get my ideas down and I'm still going to a writer's club; though I will be working my stories that aren't fanfiction there.

Thank you for listening and sorry if I annoyed or emotional hurt anyone.

Twilight Sparkle - Talia Wright - Crown Mage born Energy Mage
Fluttershy - Felicity Shae - Wing Mage
Apple Jack - Jacqueline Smithson - Earth Mage
Rarity - Charity Belle - Energy Mage
Pinkie Pie - Willamena Diane Pieman - Earth Mage
Rainbow Dash - Raine Bowers - Air Mage
Spike - Spencer Wright - Dragon Mage
Gilda - Gilda Grifton - Griffon Mage
Big Mac - Macintosh Smithson - Earth Mage

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The coral, home to so many started to quake with loud bangs. The fish raced to safety from this unknown enemy; who would surely swallow them whole if it caught them. Parents were hiding their nests, hoping that if not all then at least some would survive. The continued shaking making it hard for starfish to keep their grip on their chosen perches. Unfamiliar eyes staring down on the stragglers, with a sharp interest.

‘Um, excuse me little girl, but you shouldn’t tap on glass. See it’s scaring all the fish,’ one of the aquarium’s guides said to the young lady. She paused for a moment looking at the guide, then the fish that were now hiding away from her. Confused she asked, ‘Why would they be scared of me?’ The guide sighed and explained as best he could, ‘well they’re such small creatures that you look like a giant, and what you hear as a tap, they hear as a giant bang, okay?’ She thought for a moment before turning to the fish and saying, ‘sorry fishes!’

‘Okay,’ the guide said slowly, before switching topic to the next problem with the child, ‘sweetie, do you know where your parents are?’ ‘Nope,’ she replied shaking her head, ‘they’re lost.’ ‘Well then, let’s go find them.’ The guide led the girl, as she begun to skip beside him, unaware of the relief of the fish. In their view, a monster had been dragged away by one of the Foodgivers, and without even one fatality.

I want to share an alternate universe to my little pony that I've been working on for quite a while. I'm still working on drawings for it, but I also thought maybe I should try talking to people about. Maybe it'll help to get it out there if I left something to just answer questions or just put small chunks of what's going on.

I'm sorry if I'm doing something wrong and you don't have to answer, but I thought I might try this. I've also been given a little binder with notepaper to help get my ideas down and I'm still going to a writer's club; though I will be working my stories that aren't fanfiction there.

Thank you for listening and sorry if I annoyed or emotional hurt anyone.

Twilight Sparkle - Talia Wright - Crown Mage born Energy Mage
Fluttershy - Felicity Shae - Wing Mage
Apple Jack - Jacqueline Smithson - Earth Mage
Rarity - Charity Belle - Energy Mage
Pinkie Pie - Willamena Diane Pieman - Earth Mage
Rainbow Dash - Raine Bowers - Air Mage
Spike - Spencer Wright - Dragon Mage
Gilda - Gilda Grifton - Griffon Mage
Big Mac - Macintosh Smithson - Earth Mage

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This year parents told Natasha how Santa Claus was a spirit that used them and other believers as helpers during the Christmas season. Unlike the rest of us, she was devastated, which has kinda left me confused and sad for baby sister.

I don't know why I wasn't so upset by the idea that Santa had to possess people to get the job done, I mean not enough people believe in him so he can't make a physical form here, or at least not a full one (he does eat his chocolate and his reindeer leaves marks in our front yard when they have their treats). I mean, I didn't feel like it was an upsetting thing, just an important thing. Unfortunately it's left unable to be empathetic to Tasha's feelings.

Last night we watched a christmas episodes of power rangers, and I accidently let slip in a conversation, that obviously there was enough belief in there world for him to be physically there. I knew all my sisters had had the talk, but I still had held back from saying this earlier because I knew how sensitive Tash was.

Tash, of course told me off, while Tabby; not realizing the situation wanted to High Five me. I was already apologizing and Catherine was calming Tash down, saying I hadn't mean to even say it, let alone hurt her. This lasted for a very short moment before everything went back to normal, but it did bring up that confusion and sadness again.

It probably help if I'd remember to actually talk to parents about this, I don't know. I wish I understood why Natasha is so upsetted over this. I feel so bad, that all I can do try to sympathy sometimes but mostly avoid the subject all together.
And it all kinda hurts.
Swimming quietly Between corel and rock
Playing 'round sunken pots
Hiding from grey torpedos' Teeth
Exploring old vessels forgotten
Left here to crumble and rot
By the creatures of the land Above

A sudden bellow then a thump
With a jolt I now awake
To my peers'grins
And a teacher's frown
As a colurful Mirage Disapiates
Disappointing reality takes a hold
And my eyes have hold back bitter tears
'This is from area 7AB,' Said Anton, 'It's chips!' Grant replied with 'That's nothing, your highness I present you with smores from B63!' The Queen watched gleefully as the two fought for her affection. As she mused over them, a third suitor with another group of workers arrived, 'Um... your majesty I bring banana bread, as my entry to your most recent of contests.' She thanked him as he bowed out, and after waiting for the last of the entries she began to taste the morsels brought before her. There were pastries and meats, bugs and vegetables and anything else that might tickle her fancy. She was always changing her mind, which is what brought about the idea for these contests, to pick what type of foods her gathers would scavange for. She mused over the idea that Anton and Grant thought she cared for the area which these samples were brought from, things like that should be left for the gathers; for they did make the system for easier communication. She smiled as she thought of the feast her people would have tonight. After awhile she had made her judgement, 'Kennant,' she called. The ant came scurrying to his queen's side, 'Yes, your majesty.' 'Inform the gathers to bring more of your find, for the bread won first prize!'

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I'm Autistic, and feel it's important for people to know I don't really know what I'm doing, so if I do anything wrong and/or hurtful please tell me
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Archangel470 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2017
Thanks for the watch! :)
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Talis687 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2017
No problems
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TinyLittleAsshole Featured By Owner May 22, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you for the watch! C:
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Talis687 Featured By Owner May 22, 2016
No Problem, I like your art
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BiBlonde Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Welcome to DA and thanks for the watch! If you have questions feel free to ask me via comment or note. ^^
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Talis687 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2015
Thanks, I'm still figuring it out, but any help would be welcome
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dzetaWMDunion Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the watch!
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Talis687 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2015
No Problems, You Have great work.
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meiyeezhu Featured By Owner Edited Nov 19, 2015
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Welcome to Deviantart TOOODDAAAAAYYYY!!
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Talis687 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2015
Can't Think Of A better welcome
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